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What i did was wrong.

what i did was wrong,
i know that from now on i wont belong,
but at least let me tell you how this came to be,
i am over the top, inconsiderate, that's me,
so i am sorry for all your pain,
I am also sorry for all those times your tears mixed with,
silver rain.

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Written April 26th, 2005

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  • SixPennyGirl
    April 28, 2005
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    ok stop trying to make us feel sorry for you i cant stand the whole puppy dog eyes look. just give some people space and talk to them abotu the problem stop trying to ignore it and hope we'll all move on

  • Momentaryhappiness
    April 28, 2005
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    You are so unbelieveably stupid. Julia doesnt have to be civil towards you if she doesnt want to be, nobody does. you have been given so many chances, like when you lied about that poem and then addmitted the truth, we gave you a chance then did we not? We have given you alot of second chances, and yet you still dont realise. Julia did like you in the first place, or at least i think she did. I hope you fully realise how stupid you are and what an idiot you are. I dont want anything to do with you at all, just like Julia.


  • Fortune
    April 27, 2005
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    what chances did u give me u never liked me in the first place


  • LovedIntoExistence
    April 27, 2005
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    No she can't tell me anything. You tell me yourself, or not at all. But, considering I've just read that - I've already told you, I want nothing to do with you. Looks like your karma's coming back to bite you! Yes, yes, you are an idiot, and we kept giving you second chances. But that's it, you've blown your final chance.
    Edited on Apr 27, 12:27 because ''.


  • Fortune
    April 27, 2005
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    no. can at least tell julia to be civel towards me even though she doesnt like me. becuase i am an idoit

  • Momentaryhappiness
    April 27, 2005
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    well good. u wont lose anymore friends then will you!

  • Fortune
    April 27, 2005
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    dont you think i already know that otherwise why would i write this

  • Momentaryhappiness
    April 27, 2005
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    I agrre with Ju. You need to realise how much you hurt people by lying and telling 'jokes'. If you dont learn then you will lose all of your friends not just the ones that you have lost already.


  • LovedIntoExistence
    April 26, 2005
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    I wouldn't forgive you. You were a bitch - that's final. You've lied and hurt people too many times, so you're certainly never being my friend again.


  • Neon Highway
    April 26, 2005
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    and i wouldn't cry over what you say

  • Neon Highway
    April 26, 2005
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    hmm....... interesting.

  • Fortune
    April 26, 2005
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    would u forgive me if she did

  • SixPennyGirl
    April 26, 2005
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    halleluia he faces up to things u just hav to pray she forgives you

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