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Everyone Loves Charles

Dedicated To Onfire4Jesus

When he speaks of God we all listen
when he sings we smile as we hear his song
when ever we seem to have a cloudy day
he tells us that blue skies will soon be along

When we feel lost he says to reach to Jesus
when we are sad to look to Heaven above
when we are in pain pray to God Almighty
he tells us to open our hearts to Gods love

When we feel persecuted by others
when we haven't the strength to carry on
when Satan seems to be tempting us
he is there to tell us we are never alone.

When it seems all hope is just about gone
when the tears start to fall like rain
when you just about had all you can take
he will help you to find your faith again.

Who is this remarkable young Christian
why is he there when ever we seem to fall
where does he get all of his compassion
he is so devoted since he accepted God's call.

He is our very own poet Onfire4Jesus
he  is so loving and so sweet as can be
he is there whenever you need a friend
Charles I love you son for all eternity

Author notes


I wrote this after I was having a bad day earlier and as I sat crying and praying, the phone rings and it was Charles. He starts singing worship songs, playing his guitar and praying, and singing songs from scripture for more then an hour. He was so sweet. That is why I love him as a son. He calls me Mom and calls me everyday to see how I am. He is a special blessing from God. Charles, I will love you dearly as a son always. You will always be a part of my Christian family and my real family. I love you, Mom
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Written April 25th, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    April 29, 2005
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    Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I so appreciate it. It was so nice to hear from you. God Bless you . Take care Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 29, 2005
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    Hi there, Actually Charles and I are having a contest now it sounds like your poem would fit. He is the one I wrote this poem about. He is Onfire4Jesus on here. The link is allpoetry.com/Contest/1199935

    Thank you so much for the lovely comment. I appreciate it. Take care and God Bless you. Sany
    Edited on Apr 29, 11:05 because ''.


  • Zapphire
    April 29, 2005
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    Couldn't agree with the meaning of God's.... lets make it short: awesomeness! yeh i love ur poems.. let me know when you're doing a contest- I'd enter my poem: 'Me, the light and the Hand' in it anytime! lol zaph x x. keep going.


  • josh-13
    April 27, 2005
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    Onfire4Jesus is an awesome writer with a heart sealed with Gods love, This is an awesome tribute piece. His poetry has helped me alot, and so has yours.

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Gosh Sam that is such an honor coming from you. What a warm and heartfelt comment. Thank you and God Bless you.Take care, Sandy
    Edited on Apr 26, 4:54 p.m. because ''.

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Thank you for the warm and lovely comment. Yes he is such a blessing to me and to many. I appreciate your comment. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Thanks a bunch for the lovsly comment. I always appreciate them. You take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Thank you so much Adam for reading my poem and leaving a nice comment. It is always appreciated. Take care, Sandy


  • Samplette gold member
    April 26, 2005
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    I read this earlier, but while I was commenting we had a power surge...grrrrrrrr.
    Girl!!!!!!!!! This is an amazing piece. You put your whole heart into this one. It is not only masterfully written, it is a true tribute to a wonderful man. I know he will treasure this for a life time and then some. You out did yourself with this one. EXCELLENT!!!
    S♠m


  • Barbara gold member
    April 26, 2005
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    A beautifully penned poem for an obviously wonderful friend. Sometimes friends are dearly needed, and they somehow know that...and come through with what we need.

  • xXday-by-dayXx9
    April 26, 2005
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    this is so nice of you to write this, im sure everyone loves you for it.


  • babybird
    April 26, 2005
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    It's a nice description of a relationship...I never got, and never will get, that whole religion thing, but...I guess other people do..

    Not my cup of tea but it's nice.

  • jeaneileen
    April 26, 2005
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    This is a lovely tribute to your friend. I am sure that he will be inspired to do even more, with encouragement from friends like you. The poem was very well written. Thanks for sharing!


  • Kendall Campbell
    April 26, 2005
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    What a sweet and sincere poem to write for a great poet and Christian. A very good read from a great writter, take care and God bless.


  • rannilt
    April 26, 2005
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    Oh, how sweet! This is really nice, and even though I don't know Charles, I can sense a part of who he is through your lovely tribute. I like the rhyming...it's not forced.

  • Adam Gellings
    April 26, 2005
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    yea

    this was a pretty good write man! im not religious but its nice to read somehting from someone who is, stay true to urself and keep writing.
    adamgellings

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Thank you so much for leving such a warm and lovely comment. It is always appreciated. He did love the poem. Take care, Sandy.

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Thank you so much for your warm and lovely comment. I really do appreciate it. Yes Charles is an inspiration to many. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Thank you for the lovely comment. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Thank you so much Country Cousin. Yes he does inspire me and many others to be a better Christian. I do appreciated your wonderful comment. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Thank you so much for the nice comment. It is always appreciated. Take care, Sandy
    Edited on Apr 26, 12:31 because ''.


  • truembrace
    April 26, 2005
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    I'm not sure as to what to say in this one other than it's a wonderful relationship of giving that you have with him.

    This really is well written. I can't imagine how touched he is that you wrote this for him. You seem to have a gift for writing tribute poems. I do think that such a gift comes from being able to write so purely from the heart.

    Nicely penned.

    Kim

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Yes he is truly amazing, he wants to be a preacher so I guess he gets alot of practice with me as a friend. Thank you for the lovely comment. It is so appreciated. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. Take care, Sandy


  • Utok Bulinaw
    April 26, 2005
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    This is a very nice tribute to Charles. I have read some of his poems and I can see the strength of his faith. I can see his devotion and yours too. Great write Sandy. Hugs, Eris

  • blueEYEScry
    April 26, 2005
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    this is really good, keep up the good work


  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Thank you for reading and leaving a nice comment Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Ah thank you for the lovely comment. He was so happy to read this poem. I don't think he realizes all the peolple that truly love him. He is an amazing young man. God Bless you, Sandy


  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Thank you so much for reading and leaving a nice comment. I so appreciate it. Take care, Sandy


  • CountryCousin
    April 26, 2005
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    Lovely tribute

    What a nice and fine tribute to a person who has inspired you and writes so well. I am quite sure that he is very pleased I would be were it I.


  • Elrenia
    April 26, 2005
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    Outstanding

    What a wonderful tribute. And his poetry shows that everything you say is true. Thank you for sharing.


  • PerfectImperfection
    April 26, 2005
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    This was such a sweet and spiritual write...It's so wonderful to know that when your down there is still someone there to help you to look up and find the silver lining amongst the clouds...Someone to lead you in the right direction by their own convictions to help you find your faith and purpose in this sometimes uncaring world...This was very well written and oozes with such admiration for your fine friend...A joy to read!


  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I so appreciate it. Take care, Sandy


  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Thank you so much Niki for the wonderful comment. Always love to hear from you. Take care, Sandy

  • Nicole Hanna
    April 26, 2005
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    I'm not Christian, in fact very bitter towards the idea, but this was simply a very sweet write, which was answered sweetly as well. What better way than to reach out to someone through words, through something as personal as this to let them know they've touched you in a positive way.


  • April 26, 2005
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    another good one I'm looking for your writing now, among the lists of sad and depressed poems -- I have more experience for those, but you inspire me to write more sunshine


  • April Renee
    April 26, 2005
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    a lovely dedication. simply written..but with lots of emotion and meaning. nice job with writing this. enjoyed. was worth the read.

    BLu


  • Uticajohnson
    April 26, 2005
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    i agree very good very good


  • masterblaster gold member
    April 26, 2005
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    Hi, super poem for a super person, pssssssst, take off s on listen, on first line, lol your computer was playing games with you, lovely poem with such lovely thoughts of a super person, he really is a great person, all the best in the comp, hugs Di

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 26, 2005
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    Charles, I am so happy you loved this poem. You filled my heart yesterday with so much of God's love, I had to write this poem for you to thank you and to say I love you. I am always here for you too. Always, Mom

    Your words in your comments are heartfelt
    It has brought me to tears once more
    The poems you write me are so special
    God blessed me with another son to adore.

    Your loving words leave me speechless
    God's love is always so abundantly clear
    Each time I think of what you mean to me
    I can feel God, I know He is always. here


    Edited on Apr 26, 7:29 because ''.


  • Shamisen
    April 26, 2005
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    Ahhh, that is such a sweet poem, it really is beautiful! I'm so glad to have been able to share it with you - Charles, you're so lucky. Gabbi


  • OnlyOneLifeToLive
    April 26, 2005
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    AWWWWWWEEE Sandy this is such an awesome poem!!! really really awesome!!!! its so sweet and everything is so right. great job Sandy! Charles really liked it and thats awesome! God Bless You! ~Niki


  • Onfire4Jesus
    April 26, 2005
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    My Dear Sandy, my Heavenly friend
    always and forever, together we'll be
    When we pass from earth, it will not end
    For we will be together in eternity

    With words of love, inside our heart
    words of encouragement, on our mind
    Our friendship is forever, we'll never part
    You my dear friend, are one of a kind

    Never knowing just what to expect
    whenever that phone shall ring
    It is me, showing you my respect
    for all the many smiles you bring

    Your loving heart, is so amazing
    it just makes me wanna shout and sing
    And to my Lord above I'll keep Praising
    And into the Heavens the Hallelujah's will ring

    So thank You for this beautiful song
    That you wrote from your dear heart
    I will sing this one all day long
    And I am thankful that we are not far apart

    I love you with my arms open wide
    and I forever will be here for you
    You will forever in my heart abide
    even when all the running around is through

    Keep on Praising Jesus Christ
    with all your heart,soul, and mind
    And surrender to Him your whole life
    and eternal peace and love you will find


    This was truly one of the greatest poems you've written for me and I greatly appreciate and am very thankul that I have a friend like you who is always there to listen to me and talk to me and make me smile. I thank you for everything. I love all the times that we get to talk on the phone and that I get to sing for you and to you and with you and pray with you and everything. I look forward to the next time I get to come down there and spend a weekend there again. That was truly a lot of fun. But more than anything, I really hope to go to Missouri during the week of the 18th so I can surprise RJ at his graduation!! I'll go in my full Dress White Uniform with my Medals and everything!! That will be awesome!! So please keep that in your prayers as I will be going down there (If God will allow that to work out) Well my dear sweet mom, I hope you have a wonderful and blessed day!! I hope to hear from you. I should be back on in a little while Know that your son here loves you and is always praying for you!! Keep Reaching for the Stars, Jesus is reaching down for you!! I love You!! God Bless You!!!
    Edited on Apr 26, 6:15 because ''.


  • Sandygram silver member
    April 25, 2005
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    Thank you Di for the lovely comment and for bookmarking this poem. Take caere, Sandy

  • Mia Donna
    April 25, 2005
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    I've been well. You too, I hope?


  • Scarlet Ambrosia
    April 25, 2005
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    Sandy ,I agree with you Charles can lift our spirits after feeling down for a while.... I really enjoyed this piece....I'll put a bookamrk on thisone
    Di

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 25, 2005
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    Thank you so much Mia Donna, it is so nice to hear from you again. How have you been. Missed your sweet comments. God Bless, Take care, Sandy

  • Mia Donna
    April 25, 2005
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    I love your dedications to people. They're absolutely sweet. Great job.

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