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Standing in the rain

someone once told me, love would save us
but how can that be when it forsakes us,
people making all this fuss,
but eventually it will turn to dust,
when know one knows who really i was,
all the pain i went trough,
all the things i said which weren't true.
now that time has passed,
all of what i have loved,
has gone so fast,
i wish i could try again,
i wish i could fly,
fly away from my life,
where your words don't make me cry,
and feel like i am going to die,
and her tears do the same,
her words left me,
standing in the rain.





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Written April 25th, 2005

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  • Neon Highway
    May 21, 2005
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    doesn't mean anything........ the poem didn't speak to me much.. didn't have enough emotion! but good efforts


  • Fortune
    May 20, 2005
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    what does balgreg mean mmmmmm
    i wonder? mmmmmm i wonder some more
    and some ahhh just forget it.
    but no serisoly what does it mean


  • Neon Highway
    May 20, 2005
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    BALGREG