Sweetie i miss you so much
Waiting til we get home
Everything will be better then
Even though I might fall asleep in your arms
Thinking of you every minute
And every second of the day
Sexy as hell you are baby
Cant say you aint
And I will always love you
Nobody will take me from you
Dont worry about a thing
You're mine forever too
Author notes
Just came to mind
Written April 25th, 2005
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I feel I have read this before. But I am not sure where exactly, it is well constructed, and it conveys emotion to a good degree.
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Not a bad poem. I hate the word ain't (you have a typo there). I can't ever figure out why anyone would say "ain't" when "aren't" works fine. Otherwise, this is a good job. It's a love letter, of course, and it works fine as a love letter.
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Isn’t it great when something just comes to us? I really love it when I read an acrostic and don’t really realize it is one until almost the end. You did a marvelous job with this one.
~ John
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This is a really sweet poem...my daughter. Keep up the great work.
Mom...
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This is really sweet!
Great work and keep it up!
~Summer Kiss~
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awww thats cute i used to be in love with my ex like that it makes me remeber how it felt awww its great and cute :-) do u let him read your poems i bet he was really happy about this one
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::gently hums a little Whitesnake..."Is this love" lyrics to himself:: ...
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aawww how sweet, yea thats how i feel about my bf. hes my life and i know no one will ever take him away 4rm me. Hes the best! Smile Always! great poem
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Well thank you very much Kayla Lynn!
XOXO
~laura -
Wonderful
Bravo my dear. I really enjoyed this. Keep it up. I hope to be reading more of your work.
Blessed be,
Kayla Lynn -
Doug i'm so glad you enjoyed my work! Hope you had a "fun" time that weekend! LOL
XOXO
~Laura -
Awww, how sweet. My wife and I just got back from a weekend trip together, where I was reminded again of why we got married in the first place, having the chance to enjoy each other's company without the kids around and worrying about jobs, etc. This poem reminds me of our weekend. Well done and a nice little ode to love...
peace
doug
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Thanks girl.
XOXO
~laura -
Okay thanks smack that means alot to me to get a honest comment.
XOXO
~laura -
Thanks Megan
XOXO
~laura -
Thanks dragon hunny!
XOXO
~laura -
Yes i'm really 18! turned 18 in March
~laura -
Thanks for the "kind" remark dear midget. it means alot
XOXO
~laura -
Thanks for sayin I have talent; it means alot!
XOXO
~laura -
Kick ass!!!
Laura this is really really good. It isn't exactly your best but majority of mine aren't my best. Never let anyone else tell you different and allways live up to your own potential. I see it in you and you have the ablity to do great things. What was that about the getting published?
Brandy -
I liked your poem alot but I also thought that you needed more emotion.
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good
aww that is really kute
keep up the good work(megan)
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kick ass!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
laura, i think this was really good, dont let people tell you differnt, it's not your best, but i think its still good, and it was expressing your feelings about your b/f so it is a poetic piece, i think its really kick ass, -
I agree with minimidget ya, you know this would've been worthwhile if you went into describing the procees of you guys fucking. Hey it's something different would've been interesting too. And who are the people that judge your shit. Ya, quick ? are you really 18? Hahahahahahaha
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I don't think that this is an actual poem is more like a thought and again I don't want to sound like a bitch but I don't think that this is worth a page. I'm not saying that I'm a good writer but when I have a thought I write it down to actually turn into a piece later not just a thought. Explore more and who are all these people commenting on your shit do they write meaningless shit like you too? No offense just wondering.
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I really like this..It as well reminds me o of my guy..I love him soo much!..This is a great Poem..You do have some talent!...Much Love
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Thanks gothicangel08!
XOXO
~laura -
things are not as they appear
Good peom. I really like it. It reminds me of my guy, I really miss him, I only get to see him everycouple of weeks. Very good peom, says the truth. -
Glad you enjoyed. came off the top off my head and just had to jot it down.
XOXO
~laura -
i like this alot...this makes me think of my baby...i miss her.very good write!love ya!
-jp-
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