I stand untouched in the surge
An precious unseen treasure
They all pass by without a note
All ignorant of who I am
My voice is an unheard whisper
In a world of blasting noise
Few are those who hear me
And fewer those who see
Who will stop to hear my words
Who will look my way
I wait for the day when all will see
Gone, my invisibility
Author notes
*Ahem* This can be taken two ways, the obvious one, and the other one which you may see if you are a Christian. That is all, thank you.
Written April 24th, 2005
A contest entry
- Notice Me by xkhiemster.
300 points, ended May 6, 2005, 21 entries
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well written
I liked this poem! I understood bot hways it could be used
great flow!
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I like this one very much.
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i really like this poem. the obvious message in this is very strong. good job.
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This is really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!! il oved and understand it. awesome poem!
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Wow, thanks! Wow, I didn't think it was that good... geez, it was really just blab, nothing special. Wow... ummm... huh, that's odd. Funny how the poems that I put no effort into get the best comments. Dunno how that works, lol. Thank you guys!
Laters.
Forever and today,
~Anna
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This is awesome, i agree with the other comments Very well done
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BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO!!!! Very well written/expressed.
I really like it! I love the two ways it can be taken
cause it's so true. Thanks for sharing. God Bless and
best wishes in the contest.
~ Katie
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I love this so much! I understand it too. It is just the greatest!! Um...if i said this about another poem, whatever, this is my most favoritest of all of your poems! good luck on the contest!
Emily
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