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Declare Myself Champion II

I will set sail against these black waves
Alone, I shall sail so far
Let the cold breeze pierce my cheek
Let the rain drench my hair

Tomorrow I will be five thousand miles from home
Wrap this black sea as a blanket,
around whatever's left of my life
This sea brings a certain calm, from a certain hate

I will laugh as I sail away
My own funeral for the world
I shall breathe a new life
A new life that will hold a new meaning.

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Written April 24th, 2005

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