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Pain

I don't feel the pain
As I make
The first cut
I stare amused
I'm not upset
I'm glowing
I watch it flow

A door slams
Footsteps come near
I look up at her face
The tears start to flow

I now feel the pain

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Written April 24th, 2005

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  • bw43
    April 24, 2005
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    so i guess you got caught cutting yourself, and it hurt someone who cared about you, and the fact that it hurt her hurts you too??? maybe?? nah... don't know. nice work though. i liked it!!!