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Who is AetherRyan?

 

 


 

A very rare gem, this mysterious traveler
addressing the neglected avenues of love,
a rarity, a gentleman of his age
and the girls falling for him like morning doves!


 

An artisan ‘viola di amore’
playing the strings of their hearts
those of all the young girls here on AP
a nice place to give his artistry a start!


 

Not a guy for a sophomoric waltz
be careful, or your universe he’ll destroy
he can be a Beast as you struggle for control
and making you his is his ultimate ploy!


 

He can tease and entice women for vice
but he desires a woman he can further explore
and open himself up to with his deepest feelings
to him it’s not just a kiss, it’s much, much more!


 

He paints the sky with his feelings for you
and will rival the depth of the most beautiful sunset
he is willing to pay any price to keep you
it makes him ache, but he smiles for it.


 

He’s the tingling itch on your back you can’t reach,
the shadow in the room as you enter
the presence that you feel as you lie in bed
but don’t be frightened, there is no one gentler!


 

Take his hand, let your future grow
watch as the flowers bud and bloom
but careful as you deal the cards of your souls
to play with love could mean both of your doom!


 

Your smile is his sunset, your soft hair his seasons
when the sunlight hits you it completes his being
though you may torment him with so many tests
it’s his empty half that you’ll be completing.


 

He’s tempted to cure his fear with a pill
instead he’ll watch anime with you, one on one
and when he does and says it, he’ll finally break through
and finally the bells of love will be rung!


 

Searching for his final prize here on earth
so back among the Gods he can finally arrive
you'll be his ultimate testimony
that his pilgrimage has succeeded, that he is alive!


 

Not a hero, he claims, but he is in your eyes
eating dumplings you made him, he raises his voice
for dumplings over flowers, though both are a treat
then, sobbing, deep inside, he returns as Beast!


 

Hear him growl, feel his hot breath
as you walk toward him with anticipation
will you be able to satisfy his craving desires?
if you can, you will be his only salvation!


 

He will return through love, to his original fruit
though the experience was new for both of you
why tread separate paths when you can be together
why be one, when as one can be two?


 

So forward through eternity the both of you soar
perfection in a balance of pleasure and pain
treading the straight and narrow paths
and all that was lost shall again be gained
as he sees your scars and feels you pain
and along the path you both walk away!


Epilogue:
To post his love on fictionpress
as AetherScott or AetherRyan
no matter who he is, you love him today!


Author notes

Derived from the works of AEtherRyan.
Contest Note: I commented on several- including unparalelled,
perfencial treatment, and Finaly (all for spelling!)
Written April 24th, 2005

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  • SexyAngel0418
    April 25, 2005
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    WOW... This is an awesome poem!!! It seems like you did a great job!!! Congrats on the honorable mention in the contest!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth


  • Leala
    April 25, 2005
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    honorable mention + 20 pts

    nicely written but you repeated alot of what comes from his poems and didn't really analize him. Either way a great write! you won honorable mention and 20 points! take care and god bless
    ciao
    leala


  • JazzALTernative silver member
    April 24, 2005
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    This seems like a person of a passionate Don Juan intensity. Your poem is full of the energy it takes to bring him to life on the page. I enjoyed reading as each stanza built on the last. Great storytelling.


  • FallingDeep
    April 24, 2005
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    hmm...i like this. the word choice is good, as is the imagery, and you can't go wrong with some italian thrown in . overall good job, and i hope you do well in the contest.

    Always,
    Chelsea


  • B Chandler
    April 24, 2005
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    hun u never cease to amaze me with ur works of writing lol other than im jealous lol but anyways all the best to ya in this contest and whatnot


  • ricochet rabbit
    April 24, 2005
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    A very romantic poem, and yet, truly epic. I love basking in the words herein. Thank you for sharing this.

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