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Did you Know?

Did you know you can work for yourself?
Or work for yourself
The manner you choose to work
Is the way you are judged.
Be judged,
"More Than Perfect"


Paraphrased and edited by

Aspasia

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This is not as difficult as it may seem, but you can miss it easily.
Written April 24th, 2005

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  • mcfreeman
    May 4
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    I took Viet Nam...to teach me this.


    • Aspasia77
      May 5
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      Hi!

      I didn't remember writing this. It has been four years. I'm glad you found some meaning to it.

      Aspasia


  • ScarletO gold member
    October 2, 2005
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    This is redundant in the beginning so I reread it. But it makes perfect sense. I think I work for myself.


  • Watuwant silver member
    June 24, 2005
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    lol, no, it is simple, but not necessarily easy. All it takes is a simple mind change. Being indulged or indulged in being? This choice can make all the difference.
    Nice little thought provoker you wrote here.
    peace
    doug