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These wings are not for flying.

These wings are not for flying.
These wings are hues
of love and hate
and the colors of all
emotion
trailing behind
as I dance.

These wings are not for flying.
these wings are for
dancing.

Author notes

short
but not empty
Written April 24th, 2005

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  • Faery of death
    April 24, 2005
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    Short but sweet got your meaning right across.... Your wings are for more than dancing though