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meditation

music softly
wrapping you
sitting straight
music moving you
swaying you
you dance as mist
no bones to bar
no limbs to trip
you dance as vapor
blue and green
tangling in and out of incense
music
you stand on a bridge
your thoughts
in boats
moving beneath
you watch them float away
as you drift up
and up
into purple clouds
you fly
you're air
flying to the cities
music
you call to your friends
you have been here before
this city of silent gold
music sways
you drift up
vapor
into clouds
you fly as air
to the cold water
cold
cleansing in the water like ice
walking through the spinning sword

Author notes

a meditation experience in words
kristen might understand it, i dno that anyone else will
Written April 24th, 2005

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  • Faery of death
    April 24, 2005
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    You are amazing my angel you dance as vapor above all as a statue frozen with pouting lips forever that moment before a kiss...I love you... I admire you

  • daisychainprincess
    April 24, 2005
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    it made me feel very calm
    great stuff