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Passion

A passion so great
A kiss of eternal love
He can never picture
Anyone else in his arms.
He holds her closer
Gazes into his eyes
Whispers "I love you"
And feels her nerves subside.
She whispers it back
And wraps her arms
Around his neck
They both lean in
And share a kiss.
She rest her head
Upon his chest
He strokes
Her lovingly
And plants a kiss
On her head.
She looks at him
And smiles so bright
He thinks to himself
She is the sunlight
Of my life.
He then smiles
Back at her
And her heart
Fills with joy
Know that he is happy
Lien here with her.
He takes her
Delicate hands
And holds them
In his own
hoping
He will never
Have to let go.

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Written April 24th, 2005

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  • Kyleen
    August 11, 2005
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    This is beautifully written. Its lines are short, but rhyme nicely. It's easy to understand, but it isn't simple.

  • blue monkey angel
    May 7, 2005
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    wow, you described that moment so beautifully. i am sure thats how some people do feel. great poem.