They tell me to get my mind out of the gutter
I tell them
My mind is the gutter
*.*.*
Don't get my knickers in a twist
You tell me
Honey, I'm not wearing any
*.*.*
Creativity
is elusive as you
when I beg you stay
*.*.*
It wasn't
a mercy fuck
as there was nothing merciful about it
*.*.*
I find
my strength
in other's tears.
*.*.*
Sarcasm
Not
Included
Author notes
Definitely new to me as it was fun writing these^^
Cheers for the experience!^^
Written April 23rd, 2005
A contest entry
- Write a Pixiku (Wild Child of Haiku and Senryu) by SEA angel.
300 points, ended April 24, 2005, 8 entries
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It wasn't
a mercy fuck
as there was nothing merciful about it
oh yeah nothing merciful about it
or maybe out of mercy...you did it
or maybe is it me talking from experience
hehe
i admire you using the word
the brevity of the word fuck albeit its profanity
it might be apt
since you there was no mercy about it hehe
hmmm
i just wish next time it's base on love not lust
you have a different perspective...
baka sakali lang
pervy things...lol
kasama siguro sa pagtanda natin
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very interesting and different. the style is new to me...enjoyed the read(s)...good job with writing this.
Blu -
fantastic
Wow this is a nice saucy bedtime poem. If you dont wear any nickers, i definately want you to be my girlfriend. lol -
Great
I loved this
the part about a mercy fuck....so true, there's never anything merciful about it 
and you dont wear knickers? lol 
Great little poem and hope you will write more in this style. Well done and good luck x 
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Different strokes of poetry
Well you have an unusual and unique take on life and I think it is good to take a moment to see life through another's eyes besides our own so we see we don't all think alike. The BIGGEST mistake in life is thinking others think like us as nobody completely does.
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