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Cold and Lonely

Im tired of being lonely
Why dont they like me
Is it me? Is it my looks
What happened to not judging the cover of the books
If they would just get to know me
Then they would know what kind of life I lead
If im the worst
Then god's gift is a curse
Im so lonely and cold
But I must learn to be bold
Mrs. Right will someday unfold
or that is what I am told....

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Written April 23rd, 2005

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  • Self Made Hell
    April 23, 2005
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    Hey, this is great I love it. Being an "outsider" sucks and it's really painful. Your poem is so truthful, too many people judge others by what they see on the outside. They don't take the time to see the beautiful person on the inside. Well done a great write!