Bitch you want what is mine,
you better get a grip
Ain't gonna happen Baby,
But you'll get a fat lip
You wanna take my place,
You better get in line
Lots of bitches want it,
But this one is MINE
Step into My world,
Come try to get a piece
To bad that I own it,
this is not a lease
Your hair is so pretty,
I think I want some
Come on over here girl,
I ain't got a gun
But I got my hands,
And I'm gonna make you bleed
Beat you till you cry for momma,
Cuz that is who you'll need
I'll blacken both your eyes,
stomp you in the dirt
Hell no I won't stop,
Just because it hurt
I will watch your blood flow,
Like a river of red
I'll kick you in the stomach,
Then stomp on your head
Bitch you wanna take my place,
you better get in line
Lot's of you want it
but fuck you all it is MINE
Author notes
Written April 23rd, 2005
A contest entry
- Battle of the Bitches :o) by leander.
500 points, ended May 9, 2005, 13 entries
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Well Honestly I wrote it for someone who has been trying to start problems in my relationship she is tring to take what is mine lol Niki thanks for the comment it is much appreciated
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ROFLOL, and what place are you talking about here 
this was quite fun to read 
I really enjoyed it 
thanks for entering, I wish you the best of luck with everything you do!
I'm sorry for the delay though. I have computer problems at home, and I'm only able to get online and judge this contest at work, if I don't have too much customers coming in... hope you understand
Leander -
To bad that I own it,
this is not a lease
(i think you mean too.)
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thanks I ma glad you liked it I do have a temper but it is vented in my writing so it is all good lol
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Whoo! That's some temper you got there!
All kidding aside, you did a very good job on this. The short lines give it the meter that it needs to get the point across. Great job of rhyming too! Brava!
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thanks I don't really Know where these come from lol I am innocent I swear lol right ne way thanks and I am glad you like it Niki
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Excellent
Don't hurt me please..Wow this was a great angry poem.I think bitch slap would be appropriate here.Good luck in the contest
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