people take pills.
when they cant sleep.
puts them at easy.
takes them away.
so they can sleep.
i take pills.
but not when i cant sleep.
when i get mad.
i take pills.
lotsandlots of pills.
when i get mad.
makes my headache go away.
then im all better.
so i can sleep.
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Written April 23rd, 2005
A contest entry
- The Truth Behind Your Scars by Dresden.
300 points, ended May 16, 2005, 33 entries
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Taking medication when it is necessary and prescribed can be beneficial and sometimes important. But, to take them because you are upset or sad is not always a good thing, but to see you write about it is a step in the right direction. Keep expressing yourself, you are good at it and it can be helpful for you. Well done!
Lily ~* -
Very interesting. Now sure what brought this on, but hopefully your doing better. Writing is such a wonderful form of expression and a great outlet for the things we all hold inside. I am so glad you have chosen Allpoetry as the place to share your talent. I encourage you to wander around and become familiar with all the wonderful features we have here. There are so many writing groups and contests and even online classes that you can become a part of here at Allpoetry. As a site greeter I would just like to take this opportunity to welcome you to our community of poets and encourage you to check out our latest AllWrite ezine. www.allpoetry.com:2500/march/published/HomePage
♥Christina -
i really like this. seems like you were writing to for me. sorry had to put that because it's true. loved this. i plan on readin more of your work some time soon. great write. keep it up. GB and GGHL. ~~~Bec~~~
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