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Fighting over a guy

The things you said were very hurtful,
Even though they were true.
But you took my man away from me,
And know our friendship is through.

You knew i liked him a lot,
But that didn't stop you at all.
Now he hates you and I.
And things have gone off the wall.

What hurts the most,
Is I'm still head over heals.
But he wont talk to me at all,
Because of your steal.

All i wanna do
is break down and cry.
All this fighting,
Is just over a guy.

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Written April 23rd, 2005

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  • tazzy5
    April 23, 2005
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    guy's suck!