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Starving

You're so beautiful, why can't you see that
I love it when we just sit down and chat
Why do you hate yourself so much
How did this disorder become your crutch

I wish I could say something to save you
You have never said "I love you too"
You don't listen to a word I say
In the end I know you'll get your way

You're going to die and I know you will
You can't live and starve yourself still
Your bones are there for all the world to see
I wish you knew the pain this causes me

Is it the body or soul that you wish to kill
I don't understand and perhaps never will
You can't possibly know how terrified I get
You're walking a highwire, below there's no net




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For my sister

Written April 23rd, 2005

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  • Self Made Hell
    May 6, 2005
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    Thank you do much for explaining it to me like that, it makes a lot of sense. I'm sorry that you went throught it, and lost someone to it.


  • -ButterflyCuts-
    May 6, 2005
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    Its an illness. Part of the illness if only being focused on being thin enough. Just dreaming. Obsessing. its not theuir fault. often they begin to hate everything ecause people care, but they believe peopleare trying o stop them from being happy. Because you cant be happy unless your thin. Sorry. Just had to explain that. Iv been anorexic, and had a friend die from it.

  • Self Made Hell
    April 27, 2005
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    Thank you so much, and I sincerely hope that you fully recover.

  • AnngelGirl
    April 27, 2005
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    oh god im so sorry!! Im anorexic and there is just nothing that can help you you just want to die you dont want anyone to care for u. But please dont just wait for her to die get help it is posible. Good luck and thanks for this amazing poem.


  • Self Made Hell
    April 25, 2005
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    Hi, and thank you for reading. I can't help my sister she is beyond help. I am truly now just waiting for her to die.


  • Jess-xx
    April 25, 2005
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    wow this is really emotional and i liked it...im sorry you had to go through that with your sister though...it hurts many what others do to themselves...and sometimes as hard as we try we cant stop it...i hope you can help her...good luck


  • MellyRanae
    April 24, 2005
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    Amazing! My word seriously. It's so hard to see people destroy themselves and insist on believing something we can clearly see is untrue. This is amazing.


  • imonlyme7
    April 23, 2005
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    True so many people don't see what they do to the ones that love them..if only they could see past thier own needs and see the pain they are causeing others they would wake up!

  • Self Made Hell
    April 23, 2005
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    Well thank god I got through to one person. If you ever want to talk I'm here.

  • daisychainprincess
    April 23, 2005
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    this is sad
    I finally realise what I am doing to my friends

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