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Dying for others

Risking your lives
So that we might be free

You don't even know us
So how can this be?

You have courage unfathomable
And are as mighty as lions

You keep us alive
When our nation is dying

God bless you troops
With your dedication so great

You make me proud to say
That I live in the United States



Author notes

I short little ditto dedicated to the USA's Army stationed in Iraq! I just want to let you all know we have faith in you!
Written April 23rd, 2005

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  • cannilickureye
    June 11, 2005
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    You have courage unfathomable
    And are as mighty as lions

    Hm....that's kinda doesn't flow...well...with the rythym. good word((unfathomable)), but it seemed like u forced it into the poem..

    Great write though...just needs some spit and polish.

    <33 Amalie


  • LilMissLoser
    April 23, 2005
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    wow this is beautiful. i have faith in them too, and also the british army.