Piercing Stares
Cold hearts
Pain is gone
But not forgotten.
Life is hell
And so demented
I can no longer breathe
My lungs are closing in.
Memories playing
Like a personal slide show.
Over and Over
Tears drop
Slither down my cheek
Pray to God
It will soon stop.
Prayers are yet not answered
But suddenly begin
A stinging sensation
On my arm
A pull of red
Gushing down
The blade
Falls down
I feel myself
Being drained
I drop
To the ground
The tears drop faster
I'm sorry everyone
But my prayers have finally been answered.
Author notes
choice #5
My Beautiful Boy
The world as we know it
Written April 22nd, 2005
A contest entry
- - - - CHOICES (sad / dark ) - - - by Alone inside.
300 points, ended May 1, 2005, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awww this is such a sad, and powerful poem
aww. i hope you are okay. A really great write and this line was awesome "Memories playing, Like a personal slide show."
Well done and thanks for entering
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WOW. good job i really enjoyed this one. i hope you have read some of my cutting poetry. but good job thanks for entering
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