Does anyone even care?
Do they realize something's wrong?
Can't they see what's happening here?
No one knows how I truly feel.
No one even cares.
They all run around
trying to keep everything in their lives straight.
My life is so full of misery.
Yet I try to help them when something's wrong,
but they don't even notice when something's wrong with me.
Is it my fault?
Or is it just something that was accidentally looked over?
Thoughts of why something's wrong in the first place
are running around in a now empty space.
My thoughts are pretty much blank.
Maybe it's the stress I'm under...
Maybe it's because I don't open up...
But normally I can't stop thinking.
Now there's just a void of empty space.
When I try to think about what's wrong... Everything stops.
I wasn't meant to think about
why my life's so horrible.
I was meant to think about
why my life's so great...
But what is there to be happy about?
Author notes
this has absolutely no signifigance in my life what so ever... i just wrote what came to mind... at first it was meant to be about my life but it changed around after i waited a day to finish it. i had written the first stanza one day then the next four the next day so yea... it changed in my mind on how i wanted it to be so yea...
Written April 22nd, 2005
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wow krishell! i'm glad to hear that this doesn't have much significance to your life b/c i was seriously a/b to cry my friggin heart out! very powerful. i've felt like that b4, but then again i think everyone has. keep it up!! (the writing, not the sadness.
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This is awesome!! As I've already told you, this reminds me a lot of something I would write, except in a different form. Even if you do say you don't feel this way, I think it's wonderful how you can express something you aren't even feeling in such a descriptive way.
Thoughts of why something's wrong in the first place
are running around in a now empty space.
My thoughts are pretty much blank.
Awesome lines. Actually, I like the whole thing, but anyways...Great job on this and thanks so much for sharing!! Sorry it took so long for me to comment!!
Elizabeth
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Awesome poem. I love how expressive it is. Keeping posting your best! Oh by the way. You do know me. I go to Daniel, I'm in your grade, we used to be best friends back in 5th grade. Can you guess who? Oh one more hint. We have the same middle name. Let me know if you get it!
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Good job but you gave me a freaking heart attack... evil person... grr... *mumbles insistintly* stupid shelly... well not really but yeah... I DO CARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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wondeful poem,it's very expressive and open, keep writing. great write. and it's even better to read when u know that alot of ppl can relate, awesome!
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Splendid! Wow new word. Anyway, I really think that a LOT of people will relate to this [yet again :-)] Including me. Well Shelley, i care how you feel, even thought it might not seem like it sometimes. Anyway,
Is it my fault?
Or is it just something that was accidentally looked over?
Thoughts of why something's wrong in the first place
are running around in a now empty space.
My thoughts are pretty much blank.
That often runs through my head. Awesome, keep posting!
--Em
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