I once fed the family poodle
With some leftover stale apple strudel
The dog promptly shat
and the texture of that
Was exactly like Chicken Pot Noodle....
Author notes
I'd just woken up, and my wife said the radio station wanted something funny on Pot Noodle, so I scribbled this out and was just about to ring in, when she read it, laughed, and THEN told me they were looking for something to use to advertise the durn thing!
Written April 22nd, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
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What did you think
Comments
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Wow. This is a hilarious poem! I love the way it flows and the story behind it is really funny too. Aweosme job!
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LOL! This is a great limerick you've written here.
Thanks a lot for the smile and I hope that you do well with this one!
Jeremy0826 -
Hahaha! I don't think that's quite what they had in mind for advertising, but it's funny nonetheless. However, the mental images . . . ick!
This is a cute limmerick. Thanks so much for entering my contest!
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Nice AN!
I find any type of form poetry very difficult to do, so I congratulate you on this limerick that seems so natural and not forced -
LOL! Great one!
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Oh my,this is a limerick and a half,poetic,funny and original! Bought a smile and alas,alack and woe,it has not put me of chicken pot noodles,tis off to the shops I go
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Too funny...hehe...great limerick.
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Great limerick! I thought that this form would work well for a jingle in a contest, and it does. You proved that. Excellent little ditty. Thanks for placing this in my contest.
april nicle -
This is the funniest jingle I have read thus far in this contest. Very well done and funny.
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Funny
Very funny PJ and for the record poodles are not dogs are they? lol.. but they are apparently intelligent..I read that somewhere
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hilarious!
I this this was pretty great! It made me laugh and thats just what I needed! Thanks for posting that!! -
lol. I love the authors comment too! I love reading Limericks. This one is excellent. And thank you for commenting on some of my poems. That you for the support! Again, great job on this! And good luck with the contest!
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OMG... I can't decide what I like more... Your limrick or your author's comment!
This is funny -----> next
Lily ~* -
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I thought this was hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!! Goodluck in the contest! -
lol. I love your author comments. Bummer. You would have won a free vacation if they were looking for that kind of humor. Great write and good luck in the contest!
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Lol i thought this was very good! It certainly made me laugh! Lol pot noodle rocks my socks! Erm yeah Good luck in the contest. Best wishes
katy
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Lmao @ the authors comments. Nice
This was really amusing, lol I like it. I really laughed. This was great, you did a good job. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in my contest! 
~Lana
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