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What would it take?

What would it take 4 us to meet?
What would it take 4 us to kiss?
What would it take 4 U to be with me?
Oh… when we meet & kiss!

What would it take 4 us to long?
What would it take 4 us to moan?
What would it take 4 us to hold-on?
Longing, moaning… Holding-on.

What would it take 4 us to see,
Whether or not this was meant to be?
What would it take 4 us to dream?
Yes, when we see; Yes, when we dream…

What would it take 4 us to share?
What would it take 4 us to dare?
What would it take 4 us to swear?
And we’ll share, and we’ll dare… Oh, when we swear.

What would it take 4 us to feel,
Something so strong- like we never did?
What would it take me to feel free?
Can’t wait to see... Can’t wait to be free.

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Written April 19th, 2005

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  • SimplySakina
    November 15, 2005
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    oh my gosh i really dig you poetry, maybe it is the way that i read it in my mind, but i just feel like moving slowly and sensually to your poetry it has got so much of soul, in my mind i can actually visualise you in a poetry bar in front of a crowd showing off your stuff,if you dont, please just try reciting your poetry, even if it is to someone close to you, so that they can give tgheir honest opinion on your skill...

    gotta go and read more of your poetry,cacth you later honey
    -Sweetful