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a very special person

this poem is to cheer you up
i know how depressed you are
the thing you have to remember
is that i will always be there

be there for you when your upset
be there for you when you cry
be there for you when you want to shout and scream
and be the one to let you take it all out on

you mean to much to me
for me to let you go
i couldn't survive without you
this entire poem is what i need you to know

you did not deserve what happened
it will never happen again
i am so sure of this
because i wont let it

i will teach you how to defend yourself
i will walk with you to and from school
i would run 3 miles to you right now
alls you would need to do is call

i know this isn't so much as a poem
more of a promise
maybe a statement
of how much you mean to me

i cannot bear the thought of you being hurt
the fear i feel when my phone tells me your ringing
i know instantly somethings up
and all the vives in my body wish and hope everythings ok

i write this for you hear and now
promising to always be there
for forever and always
by your side

Author notes

this isnt a love poem for a love, but more the love of a friend, Mina, you mean so much to me, and i will always b ther for you.
Written April 22nd, 2005

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  • mumma
    August 26, 2006
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    you seem like a true friend.. how wonderful it would be to have a friend like you when your feeling down or blue..im sure to love a friend like you...


  • Scorpions Kiss
    July 22, 2005
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    aww this is so sweet


  • RoseOfTheDamned
    June 20, 2005
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    aww hunny this is so sweet i agree wid polly ur an amzing frend u always manage 2 cheer me up!
    Xlove alwyasX
    X~Zoe~X


  • BlooQKazoo
    April 24, 2005
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    ooooh honey this is so sweet. i think your an amazing friend and she knows that she can turn to you. i hope she loves it lotsly
    love ya
    polly xxx


  • My Precious
    April 23, 2005
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    Awesome tribute to your friend! Great job!


  • Latino Heat
    April 22, 2005
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    this is such an amazing write .... i'm sure mina will love it
    pretty dam gud ... keep up the gud writes

    Tom


  • Twisted--Rose
    April 22, 2005
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    aaaaaaawwwww this is so sweet!!!!!!! its really good that you'll always be there for her. well done, stay strong, your a great friend XoXoXoXoX


  • crying-blood
    April 22, 2005
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    lol, its kinda depressing...but it still fills me with hope, and that is why i like it. it gives me the will to carry on. thanks for entering, and keep up the good work
    -mina-

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