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To have lost a friend

I wish it never happend,
I wish it could not be true,
the thing i've done wrong,
is what matters most to you.

I wish that we were friends again,
Before we say goodbye,
Now that this is off my chest,
I wait and sit and sigh.

Soon you will be gone,
And you'll blame this all on me,
What can I say or do,
So the mistake i made we both can see.

so this is the end
where we say are goodbyes
goodbye


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Written April 22nd, 2005

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  • silver bugs
    May 8, 2005
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    This sounds like a suicide note. Very emotional and full of hurt. I hope this isnt true The flow was good and I liked your word use, very interesting. Thanks for taking the time to enter my contest and best of luck!
    ~Lana


  • MissPumpkinKing
    April 23, 2005
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    ooooo this is emotional in it! i hope thnigs work out for ya cutie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • SixPennyGirl
    April 22, 2005
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    yes who cud it b 4- u insensitive beast


  • LovedIntoExistence
    April 22, 2005
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    Bye bye... Twas [not] nice knowing you!


  • Neon Highway
    April 22, 2005
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    Who could this be for?

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