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For Nothing Else Matters

Tall grasses sway in the breeze
gently as rabbits tease
the toads with their speed.

Pond ducks waddle, flap and quack,
Oblivious to the melody they lack.
And nearby a young deer scampers to
join her mother,
For save for the milk, nothing else matters.

Author notes

This is a poem done simply on the spur of the moment, so I apologize if you do not find it pleasant to read.
Written April 22nd, 2005

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  • Mysticalwarrior
    July 16, 2005
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    good rhythm...Stasya well done!! but you lost the rhythm as the poem drew closer to the ending...