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Lilliput




The intrepid explorer halts
...studies closely then moves
on..all the while the air holds
the prickle of electricity that signals
adventure...where will it be today..
the ocean...an island..a new world..
would people really live in such small
houses..or is it the explorer who is strange
with his shoulders that come up to the eaves...
or has he walked through the looking glass...and
followed the Cheshire cat....croquet anyone......?


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Written April 21st, 2005

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  • ea silver member
    March 17, 2006
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    your children's collection is delightful, too!


  • cutiepie gold member
    April 27, 2005
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    Thanks John, Glad you enjoyed it


  • macandrew
    April 27, 2005
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    very good

    Very nicely done. Down the rabbit hole indeed.

    A real pleasure to read.
    thanks,
    John

  • cutiepie gold member
    April 22, 2005
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    You are very welcome and thank you for the comments

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 21, 2005
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    Neat! Very creative.
    Thanks for sharing this.

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