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Our Time

It's not what i say
It's what you do
That has changed my way
And my affection for you

I want to stay
But run from this world
That's cut so deep
Like a stone that has curled

I know i love you
I speak the truth
Like you always say you do
Your like a sleuth

Hate it, of love it
We stay like this
Till the end of our time
On this we seal with a kiss

Author notes

This is a poem to a guy that i was with and everytime i was with him i wanted to run from everything cause i loved him so much. I kinda like this poem.
Written April 21st, 2005

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  • ForgottenxMe
    June 13, 2005
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    i liked this too. i mean alot. its just great


  • shouri13
    May 4, 2005
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    kiara is this about gabriel...hehe oh well if it is good poem though i liked it you should post more stuff