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Leave Me Be

It's 5 in the morning
And I can't think straight
Am I feeling bad?
Or am I feeling Great?
Too much *sh_t* going on right now
I can't control it all
I just don't know how
"Just make it go away"
Is repeating in my head
So much *bullsh_t* inside
But nothing being said
Why do I keep it
All locked inside me?
Why do I pretend?
Why can't I see?
*F_ck* all your *sh_t*
I'm tired of caring.
You don't give a *sh_t* about
My problems that I'm sharing.
Why waste my time
On helping "YOU" out
I'm screaming inside
But it's a silent shout.
One day I'll explode
And this *sh_t* you'll soon see
How the *f_ck* I feel inside
So just leave me be.

Author notes

I wrote this awhile back just never posted it.
Written March 28th, 2005

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  • Lady Christian silver member
    April 23, 2005
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    You're going to have to get used to Chris being around Sara. YES I admit he treated me like shit before the car accident, But you have to give him a chance to see for yourself that he has changed since then. He loves me Sara and I know now that it isn't fake with him. he really DOES love me, and I love him and we plan on being together for a very long time.

  • DyingKnight
    April 22, 2005
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    interesting piece as always, kinda reminds me of how i sometimes wish people would help instead of always asking for my help -meh- im tired maybe im forgetting something