As I felt his hand hold mine,
I knew for us was limited time.
Later that month he left like he had done before,
But this time I knew he wouldn't come back anymore.
All the sweet words that he said that I thought were true,
Now I see they were all lies and I don't know what to do.
Holding it all inside like I always do,
Taught me a lesson not to trust you.
Sooner or later I will move on,
And in doing so I will grow strong.
From you the only thing I did desire,
Was love but truth be told your love was false because you're a liar.
Author notes
Wrote it a few months after an ex and I broken up.
Written April 21st, 2005
A contest entry
- Rip out my heart- heartbreaking poetry!!! by Jenn-Swenson.
500 points, ended May 3, 2005, 21 entries
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This poem has a lot of pain which reaches out to touch the readers heart-it has been written very well-'As I felt his hand hold mine,I knew for us was limited time.'when i read these two lines i initially thought he was dying but later on as the poem proceeded i got the git of his ,'lies'-you have emoted very wonderfully in this poem
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cute write, i liked it been thru it and sometimes its hard to get over it but stuff happens, anyways loved it -
wow, this was amazing. You put alot of thought into it and I loved it. Great work.
Take Care,
Jasmine
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Well thought out and portrayed, but, like most poems, there is a flaw, if you want this poem to reflect every broken heart you can't expend on the gender. Either than that it's a terrific poem. -
nice for a moment i thought it was about me...i was confused...lol
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hey i enjoyed reading this i have been thru this and it is so hard and it sucks alot. nice job on this good luck in the contest!
-Jenn
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