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You

As i watch u lay there
Entirely hopeless
I stare
To see if u notice

I love you
But you don't get it
That i wait for you
Dose it seem pathetic

When i look you in the eyes
Traveling through the depths of your soul
remembering all the lies
I know i forgive you though

I love you for a million reasons
No paper would do it's justice
I want so spend every season
Just you and me and no other substance

Author notes

Another corny one!!! This is written about a guy that i really love!!! It's kind cheesey!!!
Written April 20th, 2005

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  • ForgottenxMe
    June 13, 2005
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    i would have to say its not your best but for love sick people its a cool poem. you a great writer so dont put yourself down