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Alone in the Universe

blood begins pour from my wounds
as I fall to the ground
with a thunderous thud
and my wings flap one last time

hunted by those creatures
that make themselves to be gods
saying that they control all
so they kill all

they speak of a great civilization
while they kill the last of my kind
they speak of peace as they killed my brothers
does their hypocrisy ever end

does the humans hypocrisy knows no bounds
as they kill the last of my kind

                                          the last of the dragons

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Written April 20th, 2005

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  • Leanna-bean
    June 1, 2008

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    You totally should have won that contest...I say three years later. Incase you actually ever sign on again I'm weepingcuts...I don't know if you would remember me but I have always loved your poetry. I hope if you sign on again you will hit me up!


  • Through Your Iris
    April 26, 2005
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    Good shift at the end with the structure, good job man. I hope everything works out at prom, jebus how many plan changes can there be!