I always ask you a simple question
You make it into a big comotion
And at night i cry myself to sleep
Asking myself do i want to leave
And then i think of you
And all the wonderful things you do
The awfull things i've done
should i turn around and run
I wish i could fall asleep and never wake up
Or to release my pain should i just cut
You shouldn't do the same
Just come lets run away
I feel like giving up
I can't hold on for to long
But here take this gun
Shoot me in my head
And then HURRY run
You won't, here's a knife
Stab me in my heart
But then just lie
Please do it cause i can't take the pain
Take my life don't do the same
I wish i could leave and never come back
And then someone else can come and ATTACK!!!
Author notes
I really don't like this poem at all!!!! but be truthful about it!!!!
Written April 20th, 2005
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why dont you like any of your poems. they are amzing.and you know i dont agree with Princesskiara becuase it doesnt mean you are weak it means that your going through so much and you dont know how to deal with pain and your result of that is cutting and when it gets too much for even cuting to solve thats when people become sicidle and thats all doesnt mean anytihng else, but anyway this is a great poem and a great way to express yourelf i mean this is really good and i know how you feel and this is a touchy sbject for some people but its good and i love it
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This poem is about a time in my life where i thought to my self why am i still here there's nothing for me!!! I felt like everyone was against me and i could't do anything about it!!!
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ok no offence but.. up what is it with u cutting?? i personally have no sympothy for peoople who talk or write about suicide.. because they r morally weak peoople drowning in their own self pitty. good poem though... also u stole my name.
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