God's mystic fading in darkness
galactic brilliance beckons in the sky
glittering twilight appears hypnotic
left, a remembrance of the day gone by.
Fiery sunset mixed with moonbeams
it's that moment between night and day
God's purest beauty is so captivating
the wonder takes my breath away.
Glimmering shadows dance upon the water
a balmy breeze blows across my face
the mysteries of God's evening tapestry
creations of His amazing powers and grace.
As fire streaks across the cosmos at dusk
picturesque images flicker in the sky
God's presence captured in the moonlight
His brilliance is reflected in my eyes.
Time will soon erase the beauty of the sky
the setting sun will completely disappear
as it drifts slowly over the moonlit horizon
I can feel God's presence is still so near
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Written April 20th, 2005
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Thank you so much, I thoufght your poem was beautiful.
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Congratulations great write, big hug Di
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Thank you Sam for the lovely comment. It is so appreciated comimg from you. This was a terrific picture to write about. Great contest. God Bless you. Take care, Sandy
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Oh wow...this was a stunning write. Breathtaking...you did a wonderful job. Thank you for entering the contest, it inspired a masterpiece from you.
S♠m
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Hi Tamara, it is always so nice to hear from my sister in Christ. Hope all is well with you. Yes He is nearer to His return then most people think. I am ready. It will be a glorious day on Earth. Halleujua!!!!! God Bless you and thank you for the wonderful comment, Take care, your sister in Christ, Sandy
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a beautiful meter you set here in the mystical magic of our Father's eye in the sky with the meter burst of color all around and the golden amber of rays streaming to us all called stars....
yes darlin he is near us all still
and soon we will be closer to him then we can imagine
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. And thank you for taking the time to read it. I so appreciate that. You take care, Sandy
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A beautiful poem,strange how we all interprit a picture in a different way,great write, all the best in the comp, hugs Di
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and comment on it. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you for the wonderful comment I always appreciate your encouragment. Take care, Sandy
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Nice descriptions. But I thought this poem was very predictable, and I've seen too many similar poems. In fact, at first I thought I had mistakenly clicked on a poem I had reviewed earlier today.
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Wow! Sandy this is an anazing piece !
Di
Edited on Apr 20, 7:00 p.m. because ''.
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