I thought we were friends
What happened
Wern't you the one that said this freindship was till the end?
No matter what happends
I try to forget your number
But in my heart were still close
I wish u would call to say
This was all a joke
It hurts to know what you said
That u rather not talk to me,
Am i that dead?
To you it's carelessness in your mind
You don't care if i hang my self,cut...
Or just DIE!!
But you need to see the fact that
It's been too long
For you to make up your mind
And just be gone
You don't care
yes i know
But i'm sorry
That i've gone so low!!
Author notes
Tell me the truth about it i really don't think it's all that good but it's dedacated to my ex best friend, Colette (shouri13).
Written April 20th, 2005
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awesome as usual
wow I like this poem alot.. me and my ex boyfriend of 6 monhts got in a big arugement last night and yelled and screamed i am putting up a poem in a few minutes talking about hateing him I think you will like it. But on the dayz i dont want him to die I feel this way about him because when i was with him he was my my real best friend... -
thisis great me and my best freind went through this but you know if shes your real best freind then you guys will be ok. becuase like you said freindship til the end no matter what. well great poem
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did i tell you i would help or did i tell you??????? well glad you and colette are friends again..........hope you guys stay friends now!!!!!!!!!!!!!! well must get back to my house in the cb bye
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i like it
you know i just wish that you told me this earlier because maybee then i wouldnt have said the things i said plus you know how i get when i drink and shit and i get really bitchy and pissed at the littlest thing and i do want us to be friends still and i dont really remember saying the thing "friends til the end" thing. but other than that i'm glad that you wrote the poem and made me realize what i said and did to you and right now i feel really bad for you because of deadforlifes post "you still have me and tony" i feel REALLY bad for you you still have tony lol oh well i'll call you when i have the chance okay things have been really hectic arround here and i havent been home lateley and this is the first i've had the chance to sign online so i'll call you this weekend hopefully okay we can talk all this shit over and maybe jkuat maybe be friends again okay kiara i do still want to be friends but i think that i need a little time to think things over again -
i love it!!!!!!!!!! nice use of feeling cant get any better than this guess
im going to try to get you and shouri friends again but if i dont please dont be mad 
feel better cuase you still got me and tony!
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this is a fantastic poem u got great potential.. i have just noticed u added a new one.. i am gonna check it out.. ur a great writer
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Its always sad to heardof best friends breaking up.I have had my best friend for 18 years and I don't know what or where I would be with out her. She's my mom. And while that might be slightly different then a stranger, she is still my best friend and the same rules of friendship apply. This is very well penned. You've expressed your hurt, anger, and outrage very well. Writing is such a wonderful form of expression and a great outlet for the things we all hold inside. I am so glad you have chosen Allpoetry as the place to share your talent. I encourage you to wander around and become familiar with all the wonderful features we have here. There are so many writing groups and contests and even online classes that you can become a part of here at Allpoetry. As a site greeter I would just like to take this opportunity to welcome you to our community of poets and encourage you to check out our latest AllWrite ezine. www.allpoetry.com:2500/march/published/HomePage ♥Christina
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thanx for the truth Babillo
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Its a good poem, but ur rhyming is slightly off in a couple of places. No worries its still a good poem. Keep up the good work
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it's ok i guess.. i dont entirely like your style or something i dont know.. this wont be one of my favorite poems ever read but it is good i guess.
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