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Eyes

I can see to your soul
I know it may sound odd
but I don't ave to pay a toll
for the portal is needed that your eyes provide

You're face says one thing
But your eyes say another
but the truth you can always bring
for your eyes never tell lies

You said "I'm fine"
And I nodded and smiled
but your words I'm not buyin'
For your eyes seemed they wanted to cry.

They Hurt you, I know
I just sat there, watching
but not a single word of help did I throw
For now my soul wants to cry

Author notes

I know...Filled with guilt...well I just sat there as my firend got hurt
Written April 20th, 2005

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