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Hello Spring(Monotetra)

Goodbye to winter, hello to spring
With all the joy that is does bring
Watch flowers bloom, hear songbirds sing
Fascinating, fascinating.

There is a glow on everything
Happiness abounds, woe takes wing
There's lots of care, lots of loving
My soul does swing, my soul does swing

Wonderful time, no denying
On Heaven's clouds I am riding
To this feeling I want to cling
My bells you ring, my bells you ring.

Author notes

Music Beads and Flowers.
Written April 20th, 2005

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  • jadeangyal
    April 28

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    Your poem sounds like the ringing of the bells. Very sweet and appropriate for the season. Best of luck.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    April 22, 2005
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    Nice soothing poem.

    There is a feeling of a new swing on an old branch, and spring rocking into your world.
    Great write.
    I am surprised more people have not entered. This is an awesome subject.


  • wohadreambig
    April 21, 2005
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    Vey nice rhyme schme here this poem has a nice flow to it as well. nicely done thanks for entering good luck
    Janine