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I Cross My Heart

I just sat there..
I just watched...
I just sat there silently!!!
I just watched quietly!!!

I could have stopped them...
I could have helped you...
I could have stopped them easily!!!
I could have helped you doubtlessly!!!

Why didn't I do what I should...
Why didn't I try to help...
Why didn't I do what I should have done!!!
Why didn't I try to help you since kick one!!!

They went and hurt you...
They went and took it too far...
They went and hurt you way to much!!!
They went and took it way too far!!!

I'm filled with regret...
I'm filled with pain for you...
I'm filled with regret bout what was done!!!
I'm filled with pain so strong for you!!!

I cross my heart hope to die...
I cross my heart I won't let it happen again...
I cross my heart hope to die a painful death!!!
I cross my heart I won't let it ever happen AGAIN!!!

Author notes

"Death Awaits"

Jeff Gordon- Drive for Five.

I'm a girl...and my friend, my guy-friend, was getting beat up.  I didn't want to make it worst by saving him, but now I feel so guilty.  He was limping so bad he had to lean on a wall.  You have to understand that he's like a brother to me and it hurt me soo much to see him in pain even though he said he was fine his eyes told me different!
Written April 20th, 2005

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  • MYownFreedom
    May 2, 2005
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    This is a very sad reality for a lot of people...to afraid to step in...for what ever reason...and then second guessing their actions later...Great write. thank you for entering.... i will make my decision by morning -Amy


  • ForgottenxMe
    April 28, 2005
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    this is goood. dont feel bad- there was nothin u could do about it. and i think he woulda said he hated u saving him if u did, but he would be truely grateful. well i think u shouldnt kill urself. u should care, but u should let him live. and just be there for hime ok? well this was really good. i really liked it, it had real emotion and it was real- i liked it

    nk


  • True Love Gal
    April 22, 2005
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    Hmm, this a good song you have done here. I would also like to wish you all the luck in the contest. Keep up the good work