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You

You should be holding me at night.....
not me holding my pillow tight.

You should have approached me....
not wondering when the time is right.

You should see what I see when I look
at you....not shy away because I caught
you peeking too.

You should open your heart and see the
Angel that is within you.

You should open your eyes and see who
is willing to stand beside you.

One day You will see me and realize that
it is really meant to be.

You will see me standing beside you.

Yvonne J. Griffin
11/04/02

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I don't what this one really means. I guess I am just venting today.
Written November 4th, 2002

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  • spinkycleft
    November 11, 2002
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    neutral

    I wonder who you're trying to convince here! them or you? i liked it for that very reason :)


  • KnightLady
    November 8, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    i just got out of a relationship that this reminds me of because he didnt hold me tight at night nor did he ever opean his eyes i know how you must of feltwhen you wrote this

    ~liz~


  • Rubee
    November 7, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    wonderfully written..I can relate!! I sure hope that he soon sees what you see.. *hugs* to you :)


  • Manicmuze
    November 4, 2002
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    excellent

    some times we just don't see... i enjoyed this, very heartfelt write, excellent :-)