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I Need You

I want to be near You, Lord,
But you still feel far away

I want to feel the depth of Your love again,
But right now I can't say your here

Has you presence left me standing alone?
Or was it my steps that now keep us apart?


Pre CHORUS:
I want so much to be with and sing your praise,
So now I'm gonna start.

CHORUS:
Right here, right now,
I will give you my heart, give you my will

Right here, right now,
I will give you my voice, Lord change me inside


VERSE 2:
Your love is so much bigger than,
The pleasures my life can know

I can only feel a drop of that love,
But it feels like an ocean

If I could dance and sing forever,
It would be nothing compared to You

I could live and live, a life never ending,
But I'd rather be dead

Pre CHORUS

CHORUS

Author notes

This is a very pathetic attempt to express my yearning for God's increadable love on my life. He is so amazing. It's frustrating sometimes, that I can't just be in His presence forever. We'll just have to wait for Heaven, then won't we?
His, for eternity,
IGIT
Written April 19th, 2005

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  • iGit
    April 21, 2005
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    Thank you. Ahh, it's not good enough though. Oh well, I wrote it off the top of my head and things from my head don't always make sense. Thank you everyone, for the comments. I appreciate it!! Glorify Him, no matter the cost. God Bless.

    iGit

  • sk8r chic357
    April 21, 2005
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    i know what you mean... its not pathetic though its really good!
    ~ melissa


  • Racheelee
    April 21, 2005
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    good well though of

    Hey good lyrics I like them. I feel like that. Keep up the good spiritual work.

  • Emilyski
    April 20, 2005
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    it is good, God is undescridable.


  • April 19, 2005
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    it's not pathetic. I like it. Looks like a good worship song.
    Well later, God Bless
    Carmen

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