I’m an old romance
An old romance
So much that I will give
A lovely dance
A starry dance
Here in this lovely night
Under moonlight
I’m an old romance
An old romance
In which I’ll show you a
Exquisite glance
Into Old Night’s palace
Where I will show you, my dear
All starlight’s happy tears
I’m an old romance
An old romance
Such so where I will
Walk the many miles
Just to find a flower for your smile
Which is so sweet like newborn fawn
And as humble as a warm dawn
I’m an old romance
An old romance
In where I know not how I can
Deny the beauty I see in you
Nor defy your lovely heart’s truth
And here the night will play us to dream
Where our love is starlight of steady streams…
-Nick
A contest entry
- what kind of date should i go on by Viyanna Rosemarie.
375 points, ended October 21, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thank you for this wonderful entry into my dating contest. i love to dance under the moon. i wish you well in this contest and i am loking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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Awww, Nick, this beautiful. You have taken my breath away. I kinda wish I was the girl you wrote this for. Whoever she is, sure is lucky to have someone write between love poetry to her. You penned this beautifully. Thank you for sharing it.
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♥Christina -
Excellent
...lovely
....very romantic and sweet.
Loved this stanza...
I’m an old romance
An old romance
Such so where I will
Walk the many miles
Just to find a flower for your smile
Which is so sweet like newborn fawn
And as humble as a warm dawn
This imagery was wonderful! Thank you for sharing
God Bless you!!
~sweetgurl
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How truely beautiful and romantic. The words danced with in my mind. The images flowed like a feather caught by the wind. Thanks for sharing. -
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Awww but what a sweet knight you are...so galant and strong...when I first started reading your poetry you were wriing riddles of life...(which were good)...but this is so beautiful...a riddle of the heart...so much lives inside of you..it has to though...your an Aries... -
excellent
Beautiful, flowing and lyrical. Very romantic and emotive. Great one! -
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I have to agree...it's AMAZING. It's beautiful and captivating!Meg -
excellent
I'd like someone to feel this openly about me someday.
Lucky you are to feel such.! -
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romance is beautiful where ever it goes and you have made it so it for ever lives on unlike a song your heart will go on love this with its gentle romantic love :)pjs -
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Amaing! VERY well done! -
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oh my gosh this was soooo beautiful... you never fail to amaze me nick. your so talented... i love everything about old fashioned romances, and thats the kind i want to have...whoever snatches you is a very lucky lady...
love ya,
sarah beth -
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this is so beautiful...aww, it's amazing!
~tonya
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