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while adrift

While adrift in the ocean,
already having lost your way,
it is not in your best interest
to pick up your oar and row.

Rather layback for a spell.
Feeling the waves and the wind.
In time you will find you destination.

And your greatest trek can begin.

Author notes

this was another project for my world poetry class. i was ment to compose a poem in the spirit of the mystic Rumi, who is a fantastic poet that all will enjoy
Written April 19th, 2005

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  • prodigalson180
    May 11, 2005
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    nice

    nice, everything happens for a reason


  • peblenboulder
    April 29, 2005
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    heyas mau i luv it... very short but very cute (just like you :-P) luv ya lots (missin ya too... we gotta hang when you get back!!!!!!) laters
    ~sara jayne your #1 whore... :-P


  • pixyblade6
    April 21, 2005
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    have you not noticed by now i can't spell to save my life??? we have shitty schools over here ok! and i think i have a disorder. SO LEAVE ME THE FUCK ALONE!!
    kisses
    -pixy


  • t0bias
    April 20, 2005
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    pick up my ore? my unpurified metal? thats interesting, cause i always did the rowing with an oar, hmph, learn something new every day cool idea pix, another winnnnnnnner

  • Welsh Way
    April 19, 2005
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    Very nice - I do like the simple poetry

    Well Done :-)

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