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I've Always Loved You

I believe in a time that once there was
so long, so long ago-
when evening fell and came along
with all the flaming stars in tow;
And somehow two young children found
a place they now no longer know.

The moon was shining full and bright
and it that night drove them to sleep:
and while they slept so far apart
the moon did start upon the deep
to form a silver path away
toward lands of neverending day.

It was that night they found in Sleep
the silver path across the deep
that beckoned to them both, somehow.
And though they knew each other not
their single, shared, o'erwhelming thought
was let us walk together now!

So hand in hand they traveled on
to lands where no one else has gone;
invited guests of Fate and Destiny!
A dark-skinned boy both brave and true,
and a girl with eyes a sweet sea-blue
with a voice as lovely as could be.

They traveled on together there
and saw the things they wished to see.
For her, he was a brave white knight
and a stately queen for him was she.
And still, they traveled hand in hand
throughout that land, that place so fair
where dreams come true! They wandered on
and came to love each other there.

And often there they'd go in sleep
while dreams were deep and Moon was bright:
and often there the two would meet
on any given summer night.
But there came a time beyond recall
when dreams became as leaves in Fall
and fluttered off to field and fen.
The two of them had older grown,
and all those lands they once had known
would never ever come again.

But still, they remembered being there
his tangled hair, hers curling free!
Those sapphire eyes he loved to see!
His dark and rugged features bare!
The hands he held! Her face so fair!
Came always back to she and he.

And thus they oft tried going back
by searching for that magic track
but never did it come again to sight.
Though that land would ne'er again be seen
she often thought about her silver knight
and he never did forget his faerie queen!

One day, a fateful meeting came;
a young man and a lovely lass.
They traded now their dreams for fame
and their crayons for a college class.
So much time had since then passed,
but finally the time was right!
And when we met, we knew at last,
You were my queen, and I, your knight!

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Written November 4th, 2002

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  • jestercat
    November 7, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Wow......just.....wow, I can't belive how good you are, I feel so crappy now, I can barely write a jungle, lol, you don't know how much I love this....honestly

  • Celtic Lykos
    November 4, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    My comments gonna look really short next to all these others. Great job as usual, friend


  • sweetevil
    November 4, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    my new favorite poem. this is so lovely and flowed so awesome. i have always loved your work, but this is magnificant. LOVED IT.
    ~Amy~


  • Romhain
    November 4, 2002
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    excellent

    Wow, that was really beautiful...it reminds me alot of Peter Pan...that same sort of feeling of growing up and forgetting wonder...though I think yours ended so much better...and happier...I really liked these two lines...
    But there came a time beyond recall
    when dreams became as leaves in Fall

    So bitter sweet and perfect...Blessings...Romhain


  • catz Moderators member
    November 4, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Awww.. this is so wonderful, esper. You've truly captured fate's pathway between two souls destined to meet. I love deep thoughts like this. You might like to read my poem, 'you and me', about a true life happening between myself and someone who's become so very special to me.

    Thanks for sharing this one, I love it.
    Dee

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