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Here For Only You




I want you to know
What i try to show
That i love you
No matter what you do



My love for you only grows
And i think that you know
That it don't matter what you do
You will forever love me too



Though we can't always show
Out love to each other, Please always know
That your my number one love
And I'll always be your dove



Your love for me
Is plainly seen
Thank you for loving me
And always know, your very special to me



When ever you fell
That our relationship can heal
I will be here waiting for you
And always wanting your love
Cause you know I love you too

Author notes

Another poem for the man in my life, the man I love..

Written April 19th, 2005

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  • Proud Mommy
    May 31, 2005
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    Thanks Mark for pointing this out, I will fix it...and i prefer for people to let me know where i need to improvement...Dont really know if you do remember me or not, but I am also Heavenly Poet on here...but now I use the name Angel of the sky
    anyways, hope your doing well.
    Tammy


  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    May 28, 2005
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    Nice, heartfelt writing. The subject must be a very special person.

    I noticed a few typo's, if you don't mind me pointing them out.

    I want you to know
    What i try to show
    That i love you
    No matter what you do

    ("I" is always capitalized. I, I'm, I'll, I'd, etc.)

    My love for you only grows
    And i think that you know
    That it don't matter what you do (It "doesn't" matter.)
    You will forever love me too


    Though we can't always show
    Out love to each other, Please always know
    That your my number one love ("You're" my number one . . . )
    And I'll always be your dove


    Your love for me
    Is plainly seen
    Thank you for loving me
    And always know, your very special to me ("You're")



    When ever you fell ("Whenever" is one word, not two. Also, I think you mean "feel", not fell, right?)
    That our relationship can heal
    I will be here waiting for you
    And always wanting your love
    Cause you know I love you too ("Cause" shouldn't replace "because")

    I hope you don't mind the nitpicks. I always feel obligated to mention them since this is a site for improving our skills and I appreciate it when someone catches my mistakes. lol

    Very nice poem overall. I enjoyed it.

    Mark

    P.S. Thanks for reading my silly James Bond poem "Double-O Dumb Ass" a while ago.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 19, 2005
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    Well Expressed!

    Another heart-felt piece, love reading your heart penned through poetry and clearly seen what love to you always means.... You're the real deal, keep on being you, much love, Timothy

    -poeticweaver