Surround me with your soul.
I've been deprived of touch.
Give me sweet sensations.
Touch your skin with mine.
Run your fingers through my hair.
Clench your teeth until I bleed.
Scrape a blade along my skin.
Paint a picture with my blood.
Use me as a plate to eat.
Burn me with your lust for fire.
Massage my body with the coldest ice.
Sensitize these cells you feed.
Moisten my skin with the finest oils.
Flood my pores with your sweet saliva.
Trace your fingertips down my body.
Treat me as paper and write a poem.
Bathe me in a shower of flowers.
Anything to make me feel.
Replace the empty numbness inside.
Make me moan, make me laugh, make me cry.
Be my savior and make me feel.
Make me love you, make me hate you, make me fear you.
Make me scream with pain, make me gasp with pleasure.
Make my mind go blank, make my blood congeal.
Be a knight in shining armor.
A cold metal body to make me chill.
Be a dragon and breathe with flame.
Scratch me with scales and scald me with your breath.
Be a lover soft and tender.
Intoxicate me with a feeling.
Cold, hot, soft or hard.
Pleasure, pain, rough or gentle.
Bite me scratch me, pet me, kiss me.
Drown me in an ocean of senses.
Blind and bind me, act on instinct.
In a whirlwind of sensation leave me reeling.
Deliver me from nothingness.
Now and forever hold me fast.
Imprint your essence on my being.
Make your mark and stake a claim.
Make me feel you when you're not there.
Touch me in life and meet me in dreams.
Find my pulse and make it race.
Take me beyond pain or pleasure.
Fill me with pure emotion.
Make my body hum with your touch.
Overload my senses with your leisure.
Tantalize me until my hunger teems.
Author notes
Dedicated to Josh.
Written April 18th, 2005
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Damn, thats deep Lilly your passion was endless. Lust, beauty, deep, and seduction.
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a good poem but i could swear when i created this contest i named it dark contest, so please enter a dark poem and dont take this disqualification as an insult, but i liked the poem in general and if this were a different contest you probobly would have a chance at winning
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Delightful
I love this poem and yes I would be saying this anyway. This is full of emotion and twisted taboos. I love it. -
So sexy, sensual and passionate. That is how my ex made me feel for six years. Delicious torment. So far I adore ur work.
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Wonderful
This makes me shiver. It's very sensual - and so descriptive of how many people feel (or at least I know I do). Something to take away the emptiness - pain, pleasure, pleasure in pain. Anything. I think this was written very well.
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Wow, damn girl. You listed every one of my turn ons. You took your time on this one. This is awesome and a major turn on. Reading this makes me horney,...um I mean happy!!! Awwwww I'm proud to have a piece like this dedicated to me.
This poem cheered me up, And woke me up. I'll call you today. Mabie a little later today cause of band practice and everything. muah Lotz of love. josh
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