The certainty that you know
Of my love
Comforts me
And I'm sure you will keep it
Safe
Your smile lets me know
That you love
All of me
And you know I will keep it
Safe
We never had a need for words
Or the kiss' silent herds
Your eyes tell me everything
"Why prove it with a ring?"
We have all of time you know
So my love
Lie with me
Remain in my heart and keep it
Safe
You have a place with me you know
And this love
Stays in me
And for all time I keep it
Safe
We never had a need for words
Or the kiss' silent herds
My eyes tell you everything
"Why prove it with a ring?"
Author notes
There has been so much trouble in this relationship, and still, it seems that we both know that this is where we belong.
Also, the trouble seems to be ending lately 
Written April 19th, 2005
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A contest entry
- Love...Plain and Simple by SweetPassion08.
300 points, ended April 27, 2005, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really really liked this poem; it doesn't take a ring to prove how one's heart feels inside and you certainly made that point stand out loud and clear in this piece!!! Very very well done! Amazing piece!!!!
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This is stunning.
Woah.
Totally beautifully written, one of my favourites that I've read on here.
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mmm.. love. i suck at trying to write about love. i've tried many times, but my poems just aren't up to snuff. i can certainly feel love though.. grr. sometimes it's hard to love. i mean like, you can love a person with all your heart, but yet it's like.. i don't know. it just kinda hurts sometimes. i'm glad to hear that your troubles are lightening up. also, good write, my friend. i can definately tell that you love this guy. i wish you luck with him
write on
-m-
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Thank you so much for all of your kind words
And yes, why prove it with a ring?
I'm glad you liked that part. It's my favorite line in the poem as well....
Thanks again
All my love, MJ -
kool bananas!
cute
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I hope very much that your relationship runs more smoothly in the future.
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Ah... wonderful poem... expertly written...
I loved the
"You have a place with me you know
And this love
Stays in me
And for all time I keep it
Safe"
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but my fav part of it was the "why prove it with a ring?" why indeeed?
Keep writing,
Keep posting,
God bless u (& ur love)
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I think this is such a romantic poem.. What a way with words and how the story unfolded.. Take Care and best wishes, Catressa
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Well, thank god that you both know where you belong. HAHA I didnt get that lucky! I liked how you repeated the last line in every other stanza. Also, the rhyming didnt seemed forced at all. Very good job and good luck in ur relationship!
Sassy
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