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Without You

After times I had with you
All the things I did just came back to me
Now I see and I agree
That I am in the middle of a cleansing
Found your picture on the floor
I can't help but think
That maybe I deserve to die
Pay for things that I could never give you.

Never is there a time of day
That I don't think think about the way
It use to be
Between you and me
Everything is over
Yes, everything is gone
And I can see
You, in me.

Little by little it all came crawling back
Tiny fragments of love
A love I could not show
A love that was so pure
I will never know the pain
That I put you through before you left me her alone
Now I'm here on my own
And I don't know what to do
Cause I can't have you.

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Written April 18th, 2005

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  • imacrazymonkey
    April 19, 2005
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    Very sad and interesting. I understand what you are going through...I may not know the circumstances but don't be too hard on yourself. Great poem once again.