Jesus, my sweet lord.
I have found him in prayer.
A repentance of my sins...
I let known into the church.
That he might make a home in Heaven for me.
One day...
I emerged into the water.
After such things the preacher did say...
In baptism with my lord.
He has washed me clean of my sins...
I praise his holy name.
I have become a new creature.
One that can ask for forgivness in my prayers.
I have become a Christian...
Now a life I give to him...
By attending church and living right.
Author notes
Written April 18th, 2005
A contest entry
- Learn me all about Christianity by leander.
350 points, ended April 24, 2005, 11 entries
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Congratulations on both the fact you have been saved and the wonderful poem you wrote about it. We can only hope that your willingness to share this beautiful moment can help lead someone else to make the same decision. May God continue to bless you as you follow Jesus.
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This is very direct and to the point as you express your views on Christianity. I am glad that you have found joy and peace with the Lord. Being baptized in the Holy Spirit is the greatest feeling ever known I believe and then choosing the path to walk with Christ. Thank-you for entering the contest!
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You brought along the visions you have on Christianity very well here
Thank you for entering and good luck with everything you do!
Leander -
this ain't like your other stuff, Superb no the less. This is a really great poem. God is good to us, all we have to do is turn ourselves over to him. Great work, and good luck in the contest.
Preston


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