I love the way of you....
The night, the day of you
The yesterday and today of you
Tomorrow and all of my tomorrows
I will stay with you
There is no hour of any day
where you are not with me
Your face before me, even when apart
Your heart beats in me
In every place, your love within me
No trial and no sorrow can defeat me
Life cannot beat me
At any time I can retreat
To where your warmth will greet me
I love the light of you
The everything's alright of you
Each blessed sight of you
A reminder you are part of me
The soul and heart of me
I love the sway of you
The dance of life that we
Will share for all eternity
This song of love I play
Is just to say
I love the way of you
Author notes
1138 - Best wishes for a long and happy married life together.
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A contest entry
- Love Is Eternal by Heartsafires.
2600 points, ended July 4, 2007, 17 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Nice to read.
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Awww....this is so romantic and beautifully written. I was smiling by the time I was done reading it.
I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest
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There is no hour of any day
where you are not with me
Your face before me, even when apart
Your heart beats in me
I love this part.
stunning write. beautifully done,
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This is quite original in my eyes. I wasn't too fancy about the continuous over usage of the word "YOU" but somehow I was drawn away from it with the beauty behind the poem. Thank you very much for the entry and good luck
<3Damien
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This is BEAUTIFUL! I love it! It has a lot of feeling to it and I really admire that!
Good job, good luck, and keep up the great writing!
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This is very nice. I like the flow to it. I like the way it sounds. I just wanted to congratulate you on all the well deserved trophies. Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into my contest.
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Aww what a truly beautiful write. Your words are so very touching! This poem is word-perfect, it all fits in together so nicely, and flows so well. It could almost be made into a song! Well done.
Thanks very much for entering my contest
- Blossom ♥
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Stunning
Absolutely gorgeous poem. So perfect for a wedding. Lovely in every way. I would select a favorite line but I would have to copy every line and put it in here. Beautifully romantic.
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Wow! This is such a beautiful poem. I love this one very much. You did a wonderful job with the emotions. I could feel them come right from your heart. You have written such a wonderful piece. I'm in love with it. Thanks for entering my contest and I wish you the best of luck! Exactly what I was looking for.
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"I love the way of you/The night, the day of you..." Brilliant! You use the repetition to create such a lovely lilt to the poem...I enjoyed this very much; thanks for sharing!
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Wonderful
Straight from the heart from one who understands true love. . .certainly a rare reality you've shared in this piece. Well done. Good luck to you.
~Mary O
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Gorgeous. and sweet AN--thank you. The flow is wonderful. The words express the emotion clearly and beautifully.
"There is no hour of any day
where you are not with me"...
"In every place, your love within me"...
"I love the sway of you
The dance of life that we
Will share for all eternity
This song of love I play
Is just to say
I love the way of you"
Lovely.
Good luck in the contest!
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I think this is absolutely beautiful! Thank you for your entry.
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This was very romantic, just to love the way of someone shows the power of love and really captures the type of love we all search to find. Your opening stanza really captured me. You used repetition really well and the ending was a lovely way to finish. There are so many touching parts I could not possibly pick out my favourite. Thanks for sharing this lovely affectionate piece x
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beautiful piece here, i can almost hear the piano playing as i read, thanks for sharing
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beautiful piece full of emotion. i can almost hear the piano playing as i'm reading. thankyou for sharing
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i like it, nice write, this person must be lucky to have someone like you
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Beautiful piece, with great rhyme and flow. The repetition is perfect. Love it.
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Beautiful
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Stand Alone Poem.
These types of poems also known as stand alone...
I'll tell you why this comes to be known.
The reason is a simple fact...
The ending is the same word as above just for that.
It's an excellent write in my eyes...
Just as the same thing believes my mind.
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beautiful...such flow..
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this is beautiful. Congrats on the trophies and thank you for the entry
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GOOD LUCK.
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aw this is so sad...but so pretty
the first stanza really brings you and keeps you. who knew?!?
good luck in the contest though i would totally give you gold now
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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This was sweet. I thought by the title it would be cliché but you proved me wrong and I loveeverything about this poem! Thanks for the entry
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This read like a love song!
Wonderful entry - very smooth and enjoyable!
Thanks & Good Luck!
Tang
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Nice descriptions indeed. Thanxx much for entering and good luck in the contest.
Luv,
Candy
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Very nice decription of love. Good luck in the contest!
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A very well deserved Honourable Mention,I do not offer fake praise but from a place of honesty this is one of the best love poems I have read with a rhyming scheme,it was not forced nor compromized at any point,the sincerity seared across the screen and as an avid fan of Van Morrison I can imagine him singing this and bringing the house down though the most important house is the one that houses this incredible love for your lady love your wife,simply beautiful but nothing simple about it,made me misty eyed.
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Welldone on a pretty decent poem.
I love the way you have writen this.
Very different and indivual.
Goodluck in the contest.
Emily x -
i love the way you described every way you love them. it's a different style and i totally love it. good luck in the contest
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I like this because you take such a universal topic and made it your own. I especially loved the internal rhyme...it just flowed beautifully!
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really sweet. I love how you switch from the you to me to we. it was well written and it had a very interesting beat and rhyme pattern to it. Good dob on this poem. ~Kiwi
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wow. I love this poem -"I love the sway of you
The dance of life that we
Will share for all eternity
The song of love I play
Is just to say
I love the way of you" the ending is amazing, i love these lines.... speaks true, and it fits the contest's title (too lazy to read the contest, LOL did you win anything?) awesome, i am intrigued by this write!!! good job! -
I love how you use me and you at the end of each like a lot and keep it that way. i really works well.
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sweet hmm......spendid
i love this
you let the love you feel for your beloved shine through every passage of theis eloquently written piece
splendid indeed!
blessings to you
jamila yadira -
lovely
I really like this poem. It's very intersting. I love it. Also very sweet and touching and I'm extremely glad whenever I read about someone that has found such a love, although it's obsessive, but hey, if it works, who cares. Great job. Keep it up! -
I love the sway of you
The dance of life that we
Will share for all eternity
The song of love I play
Is just to say
I love the way of you
I just salute the completeness of the love in its complete words of the complete poem of the complete love here
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Yes, very very sweet indeed.
But I'm afraid that I found the rhyme in it not too consistent enough. It made it jar a little. The rest of the verses not having the same power and lightness of the first verse. Well the second and third got very close.
Your end line repitition worked very well though. I thought that that gave it a lot of power. And the first verse was definately breathtaking. I must say that that worked very well indeed. -
Absolutely adorable. Sweet to the point of making sugar jealous. Fantasticly penned. Sometimes in life we need to slow down and take a nice silly look at things, as you have here. Bravo!!
Blessed be
~~Serenity~~
Billie Jean
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