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Pillows

You make me go wild!
Screaming into pillows
Reckless
and out of your world now

Where was that call?
I hear your voice
But it's not...


calling to me.

I hear the trees yell and scream
But they're not calling to me, they're not calling me

Author notes

emptiness
Written April 18th, 2005

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  • aimlesslywording
    April 18, 2005
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    hehe yeah yhea you're sweet. hahah that poem was a piece of crap. thanks for the comments . ALWAYS appreciated

  • marrow
    April 18, 2005
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    I like how this took a very different approach to nature then we usually do. I just finished reading poems about Earth Day and such... so this was a nice follow up. Loved it as always.
    Edited on Apr 18, 7:33 p.m. because 'cuz I'm dumb'.


  • DrowningInSolitude
    April 18, 2005
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    great poem!!!!